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Forktongue
Am I falling or flying?
If nothing has stopped me
is the choice not mine?
Am I clearing the hurdles
or just jump at the right times?
Am I breaking away
or leaving behind?
I feel like I'm falling
my dream is to fly
Creating new shapes
or forgetting the old?
Walking the used path
or doing as I'm told?
Following shadows believable lies
Is this trail I've been blazing my road to demise?
Have I accepted my environment?
Or am I drowning?
I'm sweating from my soul
Or is this drowning?
Am I falling or flying?
If nothing has stopped me
is the choice not mine?
Am I clearing the hurdles
or just jump at the right times?
Am I breaking away
or leaving behind?
I feel like I'm falling
my dream is to fly
Creating new shapes
or forgetting the old?
Walking the used path
or doing as I'm told?
Following shadows believable lies
Is this trail I've been blazing my road to demise?
Have I accepted my environment?
Or am I drowning?
I'm sweating from my soul
Or is this drowning?
Am I falling or flying?
Published 31st Dec 2013
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31st Dec 2013 4:01pm
Great and thought-provoking words, Twitch. I like the questions you raise, the answers ungiven. Deep and beautiful.
2nd Jan 2014 1:28am
Sorry for the slow reply Ms Chi. A few hardware issues. As always your words humbling Ms. Thank you again.
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2nd Jan 2014 1:30am
31st Dec 2013 4:32pm
There's a message in each line.Deep inside you already know. I thank you for sharing this TS...XO
2nd Jan 2014 1:32am
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31st Dec 2013 6:40pm
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2nd Jan 2014 1:36am
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2013 8:53pm
...oh the quizzes our conscience gives us and we always have the answers buried inside, yet the doubt in us reign; confusing us and leaving us wondering if we're falling or flying! Fabulous piece Sway...Xo
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2nd Jan 2014 1:41am
You are always pleasure Lady Rain. Your words always mean heaps M'lady. Thank you loads.
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2nd Jan 2014 7:52am
I hear you Ms Petit. Right you are. Maybe a bit of a free fall won't hurt. Lol. Thank you Ms P.
2nd Jan 2014 3:58pm
Breaking away from the conditionings of the mind's entrapments... I chase the breeze or is it pushing me? Love this conceptual pondering which I have visited myself... "I'm sweating from my soul" I love that line :)
3rd Jan 2014 1:14pm
8th Jan 2014 6:47am
You know what I love about your writing? That it inspires me to write more.. I love this one for sure!
8th Jan 2014 8:45am