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Cavern Glows
Within the rocks of the barren hillside
a lustre beckons the bold climber
into the drawing cavern, alight
with the pearl sheen light, its walls
glowing with the rooted beauty
of biting flings of star sparkle.
A hundred thousand ridges, smooth
glass silk under fingertips, moving
closer, closer to the enamel pull.
a lustre beckons the bold climber
into the drawing cavern, alight
with the pearl sheen light, its walls
glowing with the rooted beauty
of biting flings of star sparkle.
A hundred thousand ridges, smooth
glass silk under fingertips, moving
closer, closer to the enamel pull.
Published 30th Dec 2013
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30th Dec 2013 12:16pm
30th Dec 2013 12:37pm
There are hints, for those who like cryptic challenges, about what this describes.
One clue:
I posted this in the Darkscape Endless Comp
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/6323/
One clue:
I posted this in the Darkscape Endless Comp
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/6323/
30th Dec 2013 12:17pm
30th Dec 2013 12:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 3:44pm
30th Dec 2013 2:05pm
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30th Dec 2013 7:29pm
31st Dec 2013 2:31am
Is like your imagination pours situations , landscapes, and mysterious scenarios on a keyboard for our entertainment and at the same time stimulating our creativity. (At least in my case)
Perfection I must say !!
Perfection I must say !!
31st Dec 2013 5:30am
Your comment made me so happy, Cesar. I can't tell you how delighted I am to think I may have nudged someone's creativity!
Thank you.
:)
Thank you.
:)
31st Dec 2013 4:59am
31st Dec 2013 5:32am
Aha, Jake is onto something... Halfway to a VERY dark scene.
Any curious poets, PM me for the answer, lol.
Any curious poets, PM me for the answer, lol.
Or....Getting one's braces tightened--perhaps??
Clever metaphor for dental work!!
(What a p a i n !!!) (LOL!)
Clever metaphor for dental work!!
(What a p a i n !!!) (LOL!)
31st Dec 2013 5:33am
Oops, Dark Enchantress, your guess missed the mark, lol. Although you are right, dental work is painful...
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
31st Dec 2013 12:53pm
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1st Jan 2014 9:07pm
Mourganna, you know we share the love of the sea, but that's not my thinking here... Although I did say "pearl sheen"... Who knows, maybe you're right.
Thank you for seeing the magic.
Thank you for seeing the magic.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
1st Jan 2014 9:55pm
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2nd Jan 2014 00:10am
A climb. A crawl. A cavity. There is a mystery here that I have not discerned, but I am loving your poetic puzzles. I keep coming back to this...& I will come back to it again. Probably the main reason I am such a big fan of cryptic writing...it lends itself to multiple reads. Thank you for the challenging work. There is an answer here that is hovering just beyond my sight. Kind of like seeing a familiar face that you know you know, but you just cannot place the name...
2nd Jan 2014 11:36am
Hey, Ben, I flummoxed myself, cuz there might be more to explore here, in the cavern...
So pleased you would want to re-visit the scene! Thank you.
So pleased you would want to re-visit the scene! Thank you.
Anonymous
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3rd Jan 2014 3:59pm
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