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Re: Erotic haiku
30th Dec 2013 8:08am
Nice senryu, Gabi (Senryu is for human feeling, Haiku is for nature). Nice and very hot one! I love it...
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re: Re: Erotic haiku
31st Dec 2013 2:01am
Thank you malin!:)To make difference between haiku and senryu,here is something to read for everyone http://startag.tripod.com/HkSenDiff.html
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31st Dec 2013 6:05am
haiku or senryu, your text is very nice and I love it! Sorry for that stupid comment of technic where the poetry is the main aim of this text!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
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