Bear with me

Mmmmmm you sound so hungry! lol
But damn I like it :) a short but very nicely expressed passionate inkspill! :)

It makes me very happy to hear you praise my poetry and yes I am "hungry"....... ;)

Damn ! Love it.

Thank you for your compliment....
It means a lot to me..... :)

If I was him I'd run to you. Such a vibrant appeal; well written

Thank you so much for your appreciation of this poem....
He and I are in fact in contact and are trying to run to each other instead of away from each other...  :)

Very nice and vibrant text to call your love!! What he's doing after that?

The use of the word bear brought a smile here! Just like the perfect porridge the poem isn't too hot, not too cold but just right.

There is a lot of symbology behind language and the way it is used..... some people are very adept at reading and writing the language behind the language.....  ;)
I make use of symbology somtimes intentionally and sometimes as if by chance..... :)
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.....

sex me
rhyme me
write me
suck me
fuck me
til we cum /.....

and
cum with me ------------------

may sound better
as  both yell
its cumming cumming
can all DUP hear it
cumming  then
swieeeeeeshhhhhhhhhhhhhh

So vivid -- I can feel it now.........;)

FEELINGS ARE MUST
ERE NO EFFECT OF ANY THRUST  

THIRST FIRST
THRUST NEXT

THEN THEY ALL BUST  

THRUST THRUST AND THRUST  

NOTHING CUMS

ELSE !

If I am reading what you are saying here, I agree with you
that having strong feelings for someone such as love, can turn ordinary into extraordinary as far as the act of sex.... :)

thank u 4 all ur replies lady

U r welcome!

Wow powerful

Perfect read sweets!!!!!!!
I Love your pen!!!
HOT!!

Sir Lancelott

Thank you sexy-- your lovely comments are always welcome......    :)

Thank you kindly..... :)