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Loved
Could I give my heart so easily, I definitely could
From outta nowhere, from words in poetry
With my mind I loved, without being held back
From outta nowhere, from words in poetry
With my mind I loved, without being held back
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Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 5:38am
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29th Dec 2013 6:37am
Exactly BlackSoul...I didn't know it was even coming.What a great release it is!Thank you for reading. :)
Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 5:57am
Do that girl. I believe in the saying " love like you've never been hurt" it hasn't always worked for me. But if I don't. How will I know when it will work? But that's me. Great lines Lady. Thank you. xo
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re: Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 6:40am
It hasn't worked for me either TS. But I want it to.Like you said, if you don't, how will you know?I agree.Thank you for your wonderful words! ;) xo
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29th Dec 2013 1:32pm
Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 7:57am
re: Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 1:35pm
There's a sexiness to being able to love ones mind! Thank you for reading GW.
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29th Dec 2013 2:09pm
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Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 3:39pm
This could speak for all who yearn to say something to a loved/fancied one in verse. (I interpreted it as loving from the mind, more than loving one's own mind.)
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re: Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 4:00pm
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30th Dec 2013 00:12am
Re: Loved
30th Dec 2013 1:02am
never say sorry
I came back here
to read a gals
three liner ability
to befriend her solely
on poetry
she gave a kick to me
and forgave the creativity
so blessed
I don't reply messages
unless from known ones
But your inner feelings
are so intense
its a joy to read
I think
you scored of all your initial profile
but reading you is a lovely style
rarely one comes across poets
of your caliber
I fear..
I came back here
to read a gals
three liner ability
to befriend her solely
on poetry
she gave a kick to me
and forgave the creativity
so blessed
I don't reply messages
unless from known ones
But your inner feelings
are so intense
its a joy to read
I think
you scored of all your initial profile
but reading you is a lovely style
rarely one comes across poets
of your caliber
I fear..
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re: Re: Loved
30th Dec 2013 1:12am
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30th Dec 2013 1:28am
thank you
now no more credits on this
u know words
once spilled
are like cum
sour or sweet
none can refill
now no more credits on this
u know words
once spilled
are like cum
sour or sweet
none can refill
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Re: Loved
30th Dec 2013 3:31pm
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30th Dec 2013 3:38pm