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Ode to {FadedBlues}
Socialite eyes widen in amorist awe
to your smoky bar scene tales {tipping fate's scales}
mastering plots affixed on bashful, cherry welts {there we knelt}
by your pierced slavedom realms driven by highbrowed details {alone}
skilled, fervent tongues dance along your poetry of Aristotle fashioning
turbulence earmarks the heart's parchments with a tight lip whipping action
Before you La Femme dans la supplication
merely marred we are in suffering a droplet of your evocations
a sable brushed, woolgathering beguiler
wanderer, observer, crafter of immortal verses
your soldiering passion tempts the starry, skied fantasies
John reaches far beyond the celestial realm, {you see}
his artistic notions enter you as an azure ocean
built upon {FadedBlues} in a constant swell of poetic emotions
bleus délavés, c'est l'amour pur d'un simple...[/font]
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Re: Ode to {FadedBlues}
29th Dec 2013 3:37am
Your poetry is always celestial, Angel, I'm humbled & honored to be a star in your blue sky.
je t'adore...
(& I'm a little shocked by the photo, pleasingly)...
je t'adore...
(& I'm a little shocked by the photo, pleasingly)...
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Ode to you... you bring great pleasure, t'adorant :)For those that are familiar with your poetry will understand the graphic art and nature of :)
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29th Dec 2013 4:00am
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29th Dec 2013 3:44pm
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30th Dec 2013 1:32am
Thanks for adding this, Rose. we're both very happy that you enjoy it so much...
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Re: Ode to {FadedBlues}
12th Jan 2014 7:15pm
Gorgeous didication! JF is indeed amorist poet. much enjoyed. I wish I would understand some more of your other poems, which seem to me being hightly demanding english...
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re: Re: Ode to {FadedBlues}
12th Jan 2014 8:28pm
You're an inspiration, utenaka I'm very pleased for your reading my poems... If you ever need anything don't hesitate to message me. :) English is one of the most difficult languages to learn. I'm native and still have trouble with it, at times :)
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13th Jan 2014 3:44pm
blue angel, thank you kindly for your words, I am very honoured to hear them.. )
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