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Silk Wisps
A discordant absence gnawing
perpetually in my peripheral vision
leaves spiders crawling in my mouth.
I awaken in a transformed room, draped
in shimmering strands of faded memory
silk wisps I pluck at, like an opium harpist
with numbed fingers. I spy the calling
card on the dusty floor, silver embossed
web under His onyx skull... ruby eyes.
Safe is spinned nowhere within this realm,
though I'm thankful for the Master's sharp
mercy, parting you from fear and pain.
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Re: Silk Wisps
26th Dec 2013 8:48pm
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26th Dec 2013 10:22pm
This was cryptic spinning-Your Writing gets thicker Atakti-and very keen upon multi interpretation- I dig falling into these Writes-Excellence!!!
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27th Dec 2013 10:28am
So pleased you like it, Soul. I am humbly grateful for your continued support, thank you.
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27th Dec 2013 10:30am
A feeling I know, then detach, then crash into it, over and over...
Thanks for the understanding, Kitten.
Thanks for the understanding, Kitten.
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re: Re: Silk Wisps
30th Dec 2013 5:51am
The web strands catch, and whatever is caught is now lunch... lol.
Thank you, Mourganna.
Thank you, Mourganna.
Re: Silk Wisps
30th Dec 2013 4:02am
The thought of spiders in my mouth will have me trying to sleep with my mouth closed for a while.
I'll raise a glass to transformed rooms Atakti, this was very well done. Aptly named too, you danced around the subject beautifully.
I'll raise a glass to transformed rooms Atakti, this was very well done. Aptly named too, you danced around the subject beautifully.
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30th Dec 2013 5:52am
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A morphine induced nightmare of sorts or your sadistic dentist is your muse. That line "silk wisps I pluck at, like an opium harpist" brilliant! Awesome imagery.
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24th Apr 2014 5:13pm
I'm stoked I made your list, Case. This is one of my favorites...
It came so easily, one of those poems that writes itself.
Thank you for digging this up!
It came so easily, one of those poems that writes itself.
Thank you for digging this up!