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In The Garden Of Eden
I feel like a weed in the garden of Eden.
A spider in the home of God.
Not welcome.
No real purpose to be here.
I wonder.
Be that if I may re-live my life over,
will I find myself in this same position?
A weed in the garden of Eden?
Or a spider in the home of God?
A spider in the home of God.
Not welcome.
No real purpose to be here.
I wonder.
Be that if I may re-live my life over,
will I find myself in this same position?
A weed in the garden of Eden?
Or a spider in the home of God?
Published 27th Sep 2009
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27th Sep 2009 10:20pm
This is a very well written piece.
Your wording is superb.
i am impressed with the structure of-
"Be that if I may re-live my life over"
Your wording is superb.
i am impressed with the structure of-
"Be that if I may re-live my life over"
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- Edited 16th May 2018 1:39pm
28th Sep 2009 00:35am
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16th Dec 2011 00:33am
you don't come across to such wonderful pieces on faith any more.
it's a lovely little edenic piece of writing
it's a lovely little edenic piece of writing
