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Residuals
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Residuals
Night was a flame
now morning’s an ash,
regret blacks my fingers
and darkens my laugh.
Written by
LoveMinusZero
Published
20th Dec 2013
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Re: Residuals
KylieMae
30th Dec 2013 9:05pm
I enjoy your writing.
Its inspiring.
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LoveMinusZero
31st Dec 2013 1:58am
Thanks :)
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Re: Residuals
0913338
(Semaj)
9th Jan 2014 10:21pm
"night was a flame
now morning’s an ash" -
a dense well of feeling in so few words (echoes of regrets still warm in the coals), so much so you probably don't even need the last two line
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re: Re: Residuals
LoveMinusZero
11th Jan 2014 6:18pm
Thanks, this is my favorite poem I've written.
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