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Nothings for free
I can help but see
everything he means
to me, everything we
are ment to be.
I cant help but
think he could
be my key, to
a better world.
I know in my heart
in his arms is
where, I want and
need to be.
I dont trust lightly
and I never give my
heart with out a fee,
because nothing is ever
for free.
everything he means
to me, everything we
are ment to be.
I cant help but
think he could
be my key, to
a better world.
I know in my heart
in his arms is
where, I want and
need to be.
I dont trust lightly
and I never give my
heart with out a fee,
because nothing is ever
for free.
Published 20th Dec 2013
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4th Jan 2014 3:59am
Mystical, mysterious, you'd be worth the fee for him. :) Speaking of worth, is it worth nothing at all to the 16 people who read this before me to comment? I mean, I feel somewhat good about myself when I'm the first person to give feedback, but I feel so disappointed when after ten or more reads a poem still hasn't gotten at LEAST one comment. If a picture's worth a thousand words, a poem is worth so much more, but no one ever seems to give a crap. Why?
6th Jan 2014 3:17pm
Well thank you Angel. Im gald you liked it and if your the only comment i get ill be happy with it. :)
31st Jan 2014 5:10pm
Your heart shouldn't come with a fee sweetheart, though
I agree, still a heart giving love for free no strings attached
Is the BEST of what a REAL love will ever be...
Of course that don't mean you should be foolish
if there are obvious signs you're bring used, or mistreated!
I like ur piece, n ur gentle heart :)
I agree, still a heart giving love for free no strings attached
Is the BEST of what a REAL love will ever be...
Of course that don't mean you should be foolish
if there are obvious signs you're bring used, or mistreated!
I like ur piece, n ur gentle heart :)
