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Best Love Poem Entry
Love Me, I Implore[/font]
I want you
to smile when you see
my face.
I want you
to call my name,
even in a crowded place.
I want you
to admit that your heart
races with my touch.
I want you
to notice that I
love you so damn much.
So if you could,
just be enchanted
by the mystery behind my eyes.
Would you search hell,
climb heaven,
to find it in the skies?
I look at you
but your so far,
that I can't reach.
What would you,
have me do,
for your love to be unleashed?
Does the shadow,
of a past romance,
cloud your heart?
Then, let me heal it,
give me a chance,
to reignite the spark.
For I am nobody,
who just wants to be
somebody, special, to you.
I can't act alone,
so please tell me,
what would you have me do?
I want you
to notice me,
hear me,
need me,
to your very core.
I want you
to love me,
love me,
just please love me,
I Implore.
Published 20th Dec 2013
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20th Dec 2013 4:28am
20th Dec 2013 2:48pm
This is one of the best if not the best love poem I've ever read here on DU!
Keep on,keeping on!
Keep on,keeping on!
21st Dec 2013 5:59am
22nd Dec 2013 6:13am
I remember reading this in the competition thread ... It's a wonderful piece in a bouquet of great flavors ...
Your ink expresses so much of what anyone wants in a loving relationship
LSP
Your ink expresses so much of what anyone wants in a loving relationship
LSP
24th Jan 2014 8:44am
wow! Thank you ever so much Lobo.
Don't know how come I'm just stumbling upon this comment. :-)
but really, thank You. It makes me feel, even if just a little, my writing has accomplished some thing.
Don't know how come I'm just stumbling upon this comment. :-)
but really, thank You. It makes me feel, even if just a little, my writing has accomplished some thing.
24th Jan 2014 8:43am
wow!loveeely!!!i love the way you just open your heart,speak out your feelings,allow yourself to be vulnerable....
good work!
good work!
24th Jan 2014 8:47am
I agree.
The best love poems are the ones you truly can feel even through just the words.
The best love poems are the ones you truly can feel even through just the words.