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Invisible
You've seen it all fall down,
when you're with me.
Don't blame it on yourself,
we'll make them all believe.
That we can rebuild a world,
and leave it all behind.
We'll sing our songs aloud,
and show they're oh so blind.
Your sadness comes and goes,
and comes back home again.
We'll rummage through the wreck,
and look for all we can mend.
I'll be hearing you,
neither of us needs a change.
Be seeing better days,
and reading the same page.
I know our visions clash,
we see nevertheless.
Remember all your past,
leave me all of the rest.
It's still the long way down,
here come take my hand.
You can keep your silly frown,
and believe I understand.
I'm not so invisible,
though people see right through me.
And though I'm not tangible,
you can feel me,
I am living inside your mirror.
when you're with me.
Don't blame it on yourself,
we'll make them all believe.
That we can rebuild a world,
and leave it all behind.
We'll sing our songs aloud,
and show they're oh so blind.
Your sadness comes and goes,
and comes back home again.
We'll rummage through the wreck,
and look for all we can mend.
I'll be hearing you,
neither of us needs a change.
Be seeing better days,
and reading the same page.
I know our visions clash,
we see nevertheless.
Remember all your past,
leave me all of the rest.
It's still the long way down,
here come take my hand.
You can keep your silly frown,
and believe I understand.
I'm not so invisible,
though people see right through me.
And though I'm not tangible,
you can feel me,
I am living inside your mirror.
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Re: Invisible
16th Dec 2013 11:54pm
Love the poem my friend. Words that definitely sings a song. Great delivery inked to perfection.
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re: Re: Invisible
17th Dec 2013 00:23am
A whole lotta thanks for reading my poem ElBaby, and for the awesome comment too.
Re: Invisible
17th Dec 2013 00:00am
This feels timely and I perceive a hint of hope in there, and that is why I like it......
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Re: Invisible
17th Dec 2013 00:00am
This feels timely and I perceive a hint of hope in there, and that is why I like it......
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re: Re: Invisible
17th Dec 2013 00:28am
Thank you scarletvelvet for nice words there, and specially for giving the time to read my poem.
Re: Invisible
17th Dec 2013 00:51am
I'd have called this the anthem of the outcasts... Random thought... But I enjoyed this read. Welcome to DUP!
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re: Re: Invisible
"anthem of the outcasts", I like that, and I'm glad you enjoyed the couple of minutes of reading my poem. Thank you very much for welcoming me here too, that's very awesome of you to do that.
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re: Re: Invisible
24th Dec 2013 10:05pm
Thank you very much flowergirl for the cool comment there, and specially for taking the time to read my poem.
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2nd Feb 2014 2:57pm
Re: Invisible
1st May 2014 00:00am
I've always loved your way with words :) it's like you paint a beautiful picture with your words and I love it :) your style is so unique and elegant I am so in love with your writing my love :D
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re: Re: Invisible
1st May 2014 00:58am
Reading awesome comments like this, one of the best rewards of writing. Thank you very much dear. :)
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22nd Jun 2014 10:14pm
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