Poems
Spoken Word
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets
Toggle navigation
Create Account
Log In
Poems and Stories
Spoken Word Poetry
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets and Writers
Search
Help
This website requires Javascript to work properly, please enable Javascript in your web browser settings.
Welcome to Deep Underground Poetry. This website uses cookies.
Continue
Find Out More
Observational Poems
...
deepundergroundpoetry.com
...
cascading brutality
snow angels cast by soft lips
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
14th Dec 2013
Like This?
Poems by Author
Comment
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes
4
reading list entries
0
comments
8
reads
99
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: ...
JC-Luff
14th Dec 2013 10:47pm
sweet Jesus that is an intense vision of the ideal winter day ... carry on
Read poems by JC-Luff
0
re: Re: ...
LobodeSanPedro
16th Dec 2013 11:16am
after I inked it ... I found the image on the net - it just worked ...
Thanks for the read and feedback
LSP
Read poems by LobodeSanPedro
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
15th Dec 2013 11:33pm
<< post removed >>
re: Re: ...
LobodeSanPedro
16th Dec 2013 11:25am
I was experimenting with a two line 7-7 haikai - usually reserved for renku (a collaborative piece of two or more artists) ...
... At the same time I wanted something succinct on what snow angel kisses does to her body ... her lips
Thanks for the feedback
LSP
Read poems by LobodeSanPedro
Re: ...
Anonymous
16th Dec 2013 2:19am
...can I borrow that magic pen of yours, Pedro?! Pleaseeeee! Xo
0
re: Re: ...
LobodeSanPedro
16th Dec 2013 11:32am
Lol ... that's like Pegasus asking un burro how to fly?
Any heights I hit is because of what I've learned from writers like you ... xoxo
LSP
Read poems by LobodeSanPedro
Re: ...
case28
(Alexander Case)
28th Dec 2013 4:13pm
LSP, these lines are brutal and beautiful and I'm glad you got another shot of a lone rose bud in the snow.
Read poems by case28
0
re: Re: ...
LobodeSanPedro
28th Dec 2013 11:22pm
It's not the visual I had in mind when I wrote the piece but the image somehow range true in the end ...
Thanks for the read and feedback
LSP
Read poems by LobodeSanPedro
Latest Forum Discussions
POETRY
lets not love
17th August 1:57pm by admin
(DU Webmistress)
COMPETITIONS
new competition yaya title
6th June 9:17am by admin
(DU Webmistress)
COMPETITIONS
somethign jere
4th June 3:24pm by admin
(DU Webmistress)
SPEAKEASY
a new thread
16th May 1:07pm by admin
(DU Webmistress)
POETRY
Poem Reading Challenge: Undiscovered
11th May 11:35am by katalon_test_user
1
2
3
4
5
POETRY
Charles Bukowski - last poetry reading on YouTube
9th May 1:15pm by admin
(DU Webmistress)
Online Now
×
Close
Online Now
Members Online: 0
Close
×
Close
Error
Close