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don't speak her name
she admitted to being a rude temptress
she prowled her petulant jungles
nude as a sensuous cat,
enamored in the eyes of obdurate soldiers.
arrogant. unattainable.
what chance does a lonely man have?
I was drunk on elixirs of lust & criminal desire
easily waylaid by beauty, perfumes,
eyelashes that flickered like candlelight.
recklessly driven, I rush without radar
toward the roadblocks of my own destruction.
but poetry and love
were meant to destroy
Artwork: 'Etude de Nu' Man Ray
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Published 14th Dec 2013
| Edited 16th Dec 2013
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14th Dec 2013 10:03am
14th Dec 2013 10:40am
but poetry and love
were meant to destroy ...
... sadly true
An epic tale within this short piece, John
LSP
were meant to destroy ...
... sadly true
An epic tale within this short piece, John
LSP
14th Dec 2013 12:42pm
Think i'll just bask in that one for a bit John. That is truly sweet brother. Thanks a bunch.
14th Dec 2013 3:56pm
14th Dec 2013 6:08pm
Anonymous
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14th Dec 2013 6:13pm
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15th Dec 2013 6:43pm
She prowls her jungles fiercely, and you trace her hunger with an edge that slices deep. Much love it, John:)~
16th Dec 2013 00:50am
Your first lines, showed why your great at what you do. "she admitted to being a rude temptress
she prowled her petulant jungles
nude as a sensuous cat." Flowrific John! Amazingly done!
she prowled her petulant jungles
nude as a sensuous cat." Flowrific John! Amazingly done!
16th Dec 2013 11:30pm
Anonymous
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17th Dec 2013 6:55am
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22nd Dec 2013 8:40pm
very beautiful
scenic luscious sexy skiny body
u say obdurate
a word as hard as cussedness
two words i learnt
years ago
enamored in the eyes of ''''obdurate;;;
soldiers.
arrogant.
unattainable.
scenic luscious sexy skiny body
u say obdurate
a word as hard as cussedness
two words i learnt
years ago
enamored in the eyes of ''''obdurate;;;
soldiers.
arrogant.
unattainable.