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Sentimental Slut
I refuse to spread my love
around,
unprotected--
'cos sometimes diseases disguise
themseves as
love; unrequited
throbbing erratically
like my over caffeinated
heart
as it lingers
through the dense veins
aching--
in between my thighs,
begging--
to be trampled
and crushed, hard
by your mechanical
bending
and arching
but I'd rather go mad,
than to give you
my everything
only to see you
wash it all away
with a smirk on your lips
and that smug look
in those big brown eyes,
as if they're saying...
"I don't need you anymore--
you, nasty slut!"
as I blankly watch
all those stale love stains
(that I work hard for...)
swirl away
down the dirty drain
while yours, I cradle
inside of my womb
rotting,
becoming another
ugly filling
inside the void of my heart...
around,
unprotected--
'cos sometimes diseases disguise
themseves as
love; unrequited
throbbing erratically
like my over caffeinated
heart
as it lingers
through the dense veins
aching--
in between my thighs,
begging--
to be trampled
and crushed, hard
by your mechanical
bending
and arching
but I'd rather go mad,
than to give you
my everything
only to see you
wash it all away
with a smirk on your lips
and that smug look
in those big brown eyes,
as if they're saying...
"I don't need you anymore--
you, nasty slut!"
as I blankly watch
all those stale love stains
(that I work hard for...)
swirl away
down the dirty drain
while yours, I cradle
inside of my womb
rotting,
becoming another
ugly filling
inside the void of my heart...
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th Apr 2021 9:35am
5th Feb 2011 1:29am
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re: God-damn...
6th Feb 2011 10:52am
Glad that you said that it's raw-- 'cos for me, it's the only way to tackle an erotica, or else it'll sound as force as a fake orgasm or f*cking with clothes on. (please, excuse my french)
Thanks for the word, Hem-ee...
means a lot that you liked it!
Thanks for the word, Hem-ee...
means a lot that you liked it!
DAMN BABY
5th Feb 2011 2:51am
re: DAMN BABY
6th Feb 2011 10:52am
re: DAMN BABY
10th Feb 2011 00:22am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36am
5th Feb 2011 9:53am
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re: wonderful
6th Feb 2011 10:53am
re: wonderful
10th Feb 2011 00:21am
I have to agree, she has done a very good good at putting it all together, keep it up
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re: re: wonderful
10th Feb 2011 2:49pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 1:38pm
5th Feb 2011 2:16pm
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re: Oh yes,
6th Feb 2011 10:55am
damn good
10th Feb 2011 00:04am
I agree with the raw part, and not much else to say here, it's good, and you know it is.
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Anonymous
- Edited 20th May 2020 11:37am
10th Feb 2011 00:08am
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THANK YOU ALL GUYS!
10th Feb 2011 10:45am
comment
10th Feb 2011 12:24pm
re: comment
10th Feb 2011 12:34pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 11:56pm
22nd Feb 2011 3:02am
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re: WTF
22nd Feb 2011 11:19am
please stop quoting me, if you can't get it right
and please just shut up, if you're not gonna make any sense!
and please just shut up, if you're not gonna make any sense!
Good Job.
25th Feb 2011 3:51pm
This poem
It bleeds and invisible blood
you know its there
and can smell it
and feel it
but when you try to get it out of your head
you cant
I wont
and will not even try.
Good job at contaminating my thoughts.
Many have not even come this far. :)
It bleeds and invisible blood
you know its there
and can smell it
and feel it
but when you try to get it out of your head
you cant
I wont
and will not even try.
Good job at contaminating my thoughts.
Many have not even come this far. :)
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re: Good Job.
25th Feb 2011 4:21pm
loved the title
23rd Mar 2011 11:35am
There's something beautiful about writing on a general subject but with an unconventional angle.well executed!
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re: loved the title
23rd Mar 2011 4:24pm
I like that-- unconventional angle, that you're saying cos I think that's mostly my point of view. :P