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This is for the guy who talked shit about my Tree poem
As you can see this is free flowing
this is to the haters that keep on scrolling
This poetry site is for us to use
to share our thoughts and our point of views
To some of us this is a great outlet
and to some of you, this is all about intellect
This poetry site does both for me
it frees my mind and sets me spirit free
I like to write about a variety of things
poems about life and death, hell yeah that's me
I like to write poems of love,hate, and grime
but those poems don't satisfy me all the time
I like to write about a variety of things
like the other day I wrote about a tree
im not gonna lie, that poem means alot to me.
In the morning, I do my usual thing,the same old uneventful story
checking my Facebook and writing my poetry
Someone had to comment and say to me,
"Your poem is stupid, nobody cares about trees!"
You post all these poems about death and grime,
but can you expand you poems, just one fucking time
What happened to people showing their intellect
coming up with topics that they haven't thought of yet.
This guy talked his shit and offended every sense I had
Good thing I don't know who you are mother fucker be glad
I would cut you from eye to ear and leaving you crying in fear
Obviously mother fucker, I care about the trees
because without those trees, we wouldn't be able to breathe
If if you said that to a person who is a ruthless bitch
you might find yourself lying dead in a ditch
Your lucky I don't know you, your lucky you don't know me
or I would be fucking you up on the street.
My biggest issue is how you reacted
now you got me mad and others are impacted
I don't mind comments on my poetry or my songs
But don't tell my writings are stupid, that's wrong.
I wrote this poem as a message to you
Fuck you buddy, you can go change your tune
As for the rest of the people in on this shit
I am sorry I had to explode on this stupid bitch tonight
I am wrong and that I will admit
I sunk to his level posting this shit
That is okay, and I really don't mind
this will all blow over with some more time
This is my poem for that fucking prick
I am a human, just another hypocrite.
On second thought I forgot my main point, prick
Go fuck your self and suck my dick.
this is to the haters that keep on scrolling
This poetry site is for us to use
to share our thoughts and our point of views
To some of us this is a great outlet
and to some of you, this is all about intellect
This poetry site does both for me
it frees my mind and sets me spirit free
I like to write about a variety of things
poems about life and death, hell yeah that's me
I like to write poems of love,hate, and grime
but those poems don't satisfy me all the time
I like to write about a variety of things
like the other day I wrote about a tree
im not gonna lie, that poem means alot to me.
In the morning, I do my usual thing,the same old uneventful story
checking my Facebook and writing my poetry
Someone had to comment and say to me,
"Your poem is stupid, nobody cares about trees!"
You post all these poems about death and grime,
but can you expand you poems, just one fucking time
What happened to people showing their intellect
coming up with topics that they haven't thought of yet.
This guy talked his shit and offended every sense I had
Good thing I don't know who you are mother fucker be glad
I would cut you from eye to ear and leaving you crying in fear
Obviously mother fucker, I care about the trees
because without those trees, we wouldn't be able to breathe
If if you said that to a person who is a ruthless bitch
you might find yourself lying dead in a ditch
Your lucky I don't know you, your lucky you don't know me
or I would be fucking you up on the street.
My biggest issue is how you reacted
now you got me mad and others are impacted
I don't mind comments on my poetry or my songs
But don't tell my writings are stupid, that's wrong.
I wrote this poem as a message to you
Fuck you buddy, you can go change your tune
As for the rest of the people in on this shit
I am sorry I had to explode on this stupid bitch tonight
I am wrong and that I will admit
I sunk to his level posting this shit
That is okay, and I really don't mind
this will all blow over with some more time
This is my poem for that fucking prick
I am a human, just another hypocrite.
On second thought I forgot my main point, prick
Go fuck your self and suck my dick.
Published 13th Dec 2013
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13th Dec 2013 12:09pm
hahah!
I love vengeful poems. The hate and vengeful poems are astounding. I am going to read your tree poem. I do hope you read mine called "earth woman".
Nice vengeful poem!!
I love vengeful poems. The hate and vengeful poems are astounding. I am going to read your tree poem. I do hope you read mine called "earth woman".
Nice vengeful poem!!
13th Dec 2013 1:06pm
There will be critics everywhere in life--don't let them overwhelm you, it is too mentally and emotionally exhausting. Write from your heart what you feel, and it doesn't matter what the topic is; if it makes you feel a sense of accomplishment, or helps someone in some way, or is pleasing only to you, then so what? Listen to that inner voice guiding you, because chances are, you might be right on track and it's a power higher than us who's walking with you down whatever road you're on.
15th Dec 2013 00:44am
Ha this is awesome, whoever that guy is can suck my dick too.....but I'm a girl so nevermind
15th Dec 2013 10:15am
Thank all 3 of you for commenting. And Perfect Disaster, that was awesome!:)
15th Dec 2013 10:18am
15th Dec 2013 10:30am
lol thank you for that. Even though I am not a hippie. Thumbs up for you though
16th Dec 2013 1:00am
you make a great statement about freedom of expression. we all have a need to post our work, whether it gets read or not, commented or not. whether it's considered art or not. it comes from the passion inside of us...
