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Static fuck
The static rain her tears..
In each orbed prism distorted fears.
Her strength was removed.
By the words that he used.
So strong and tall says he.
A man apart.
By standing on her gentle heart.
The gains he claims of false impress.
But he won't release this flowing dress.
You gutless fuck I despise you so!
You weak, spineless prick!
Let her go..
In each orbed prism distorted fears.
Her strength was removed.
By the words that he used.
So strong and tall says he.
A man apart.
By standing on her gentle heart.
The gains he claims of false impress.
But he won't release this flowing dress.
You gutless fuck I despise you so!
You weak, spineless prick!
Let her go..
Published 12th Dec 2013
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12th Dec 2013 12:23pm
Sometimes words are like knives, cutting deeper than any physical blow could.I've felt this.Great write TS, thank you.
12th Dec 2013 12:42pm
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- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
12th Dec 2013 1:38pm
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12th Dec 2013 1:57pm
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- Edited 15th May 2018 11:57pm
13th Dec 2013 1:03am
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13th Dec 2013 1:36am
And aren't they just so charming in front of others? Thanks for you words my friend. They mean a lot.
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13th Dec 2013 3:48am
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13th Dec 2013 4:13am
I agree with you there MissPM. It is. Every one has the strength inside to do anything. We just forget that at times. Always a pleasure PM.
23rd Dec 2013 4:55pm
Impressive and piercing write. It's hard to oppose to someone who words you to pieces. But we shouldn't forget that shards could cut, too.
24th Dec 2013 00:22am