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Senryu 3-5-3 (2013-12-12)
My heart melts
Purety of your soul
I miss you
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Published 12th Dec 2013
| Edited 14th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2013 6:07pm
...simply lovely....Xo
12th Dec 2013 6:17pm
Thank you Rain, for your comment.
I have discovered haiku and I think it is a good way to learn simplicity in poetry. I think after written a serie of haiku, it should be better to write an simplified poetry. I hope too!
I have discovered haiku and I think it is a good way to learn simplicity in poetry. I think after written a serie of haiku, it should be better to write an simplified poetry. I hope too!
Anonymous
12th Dec 2013 6:27pm
Well, you are truly wonderful at Haiku! I've tried rough drafts and crazy as it may seem, I'm horrible with Haiku! I applaud writers who can master this art form....
12th Dec 2013 6:41pm
12th Dec 2013 8:56pm
Succinctly sweet and oh so beautiful in its simplicity....
Loved it..... :)
Loved it..... :)
12th Dec 2013 9:05pm
Thank you so much, Scarlet, for your comment and to keep this haiku in your list!! I am proud of that.