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She is morning.I am night
the dawn & dusk can never meet
She is morning. I am night
I chant my dirges in the shadows
She weaves her wonders in the light
tortured lovers, fate has made us
heartbreak lingers, dispelling bliss
equators separate our hearts
we’re never close enough to kiss
somnolent lord, that rules my day
how can She ever find me?
I worship under the druid moon –
nocturnal chains that bind me
to crash the gates, that love, deny
to flee my prison, rise in flight!
and hold Her for the sweetest moment…
but She is morning. I am night
Published 12th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
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12th Dec 2013 10:55am
Magnificent craftsmanship that conveys the angst and yearning of these two lovers ... your chosen image is just as wonderful as the ink
LSP
LSP
12th Dec 2013 11:33am
I feel this very close to my heart. It is a current feeling.
At least she is out here brother. She can still be felt. And strongly. Thank you John.
At least she is out here brother. She can still be felt. And strongly. Thank you John.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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13th Dec 2013 9:37am
very beautiful... touching yes. but i know one thing i never let any chick be my morning. rule #1- if i'm awake she needs to be gone. kudos
Oh, but the dusk does kiss the dawn in the twilight... magically and magnificently, John... I come to this in the morning with open arms. It is a star lit stunner :)~
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 4:05am
I think I'm in love with your pen.....Xo
14th Dec 2013 6:06pm
16th Dec 2013 1:01am
John your first liners are sick! Man I tell you with lines like these, "the dawn & dusk can never meet She is morning. I am night
I chant my dirges in the shadows
She weaves her wonders in the light." Bravo my friend bravo!
I chant my dirges in the shadows
She weaves her wonders in the light." Bravo my friend bravo!
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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20th Dec 2013 3:54pm
Your work is penned beautifully, and is a pleasure to feast one's eyes on.
23rd Dec 2013 4:50pm
So futile, heartbreakingly sad but absolutely beautifully penned, John! I love this poem!
23rd Dec 2013 10:21pm
25th Dec 2013 8:55pm
Mr Feddeler, I felt the beautiful pain of distance and time in this piece. It's stunning.
1st Jan 2014 11:02pm
Anonymous
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5th Jan 2014 3:03am
we’re never close enough to kiss
but we are so close
yet never kiss
don't take me a miss
my mouth stinks
so she feels
liquor, wine and cum she reels
yet others show a desire to kiss
but I can't take a chance
lest my thoughts
go amiss
and others lower's
I dare to kiss
would that do
let me know
and so I will eat
all who ask me
to do so
but we are so close
yet never kiss
don't take me a miss
my mouth stinks
so she feels
liquor, wine and cum she reels
yet others show a desire to kiss
but I can't take a chance
lest my thoughts
go amiss
and others lower's
I dare to kiss
would that do
let me know
and so I will eat
all who ask me
to do so
8th Jan 2014 2:50am
This is my favorite of yours. I wrpte a similar one comparing the one i love to the moon and I to the sun.
Beautifully penned xx ~
Beautifully penned xx ~
Anonymous
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