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Eyes wide open
Eyes wide open
Smiling at the thought of stealing a secret kiss
Creating that soul connection
A like-minded stimulation
Deep within
Bodies tempted to touch
The price they'll pay too much
Is it worth every penny?
No just another notch to add to his many
If her dream was really true
Smiling at the thought of stealing a secret kiss
Creating that soul connection
A like-minded stimulation
Deep within
Bodies tempted to touch
The price they'll pay too much
Is it worth every penny?
No just another notch to add to his many
If her dream was really true
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10th Dec 2013 9:24am
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re: Re: Eyes wide open
10th Dec 2013 5:49pm
Yes we all have choices. I was going for the old story of tasting the forbidden fruit. Reflecting and dreaming.
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10th Dec 2013 6:55pm
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Re: Eyes wide open
10th Dec 2013 10:11am
Even if held back in action. It lingers long in the mind. To want or be wanted..
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10th Dec 2013 6:46pm
Yes temptation is always there but as Rose mentioned their are choices. Do you choose to be another notch or do you know your worth?
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10th Dec 2013 2:34pm
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10th Dec 2013 6:49pm
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2013 3:00pm
...*raised eyebrow type ink* Makes you reflect in thought! Nicely penned, Sammi....Xo
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Re: Eyes wide open
12th Dec 2013 5:44pm
A piece that you can bathe within its beauty. You create insight too choices we all make. Great job!
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16th Dec 2013 9:22pm
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31st Dec 2013 00:48am
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