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Choking.
Ribs, feel one last cough
Before I take this moment
To peel my cage off.
Before I take this moment
To peel my cage off.
Published 3rd Feb 2011
| Edited 4th Feb 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 11:51pm
4th Feb 2011 2:00am
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4th Feb 2011 9:38pm
Removed the tag, I've never really explored haikus or known their 'rules', just their structure. Thank you for the info (:! And the compliments!
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 11:51pm
6th Feb 2011 1:27am
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
4th Feb 2011 2:07am
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