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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
9th Dec 2013 9:01pm
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re: Re: Haiku 5-7-5 (2013-12-09)
9th Dec 2013 10:19pm
I know some coast highway in France, where it is hard to drive!!! But in the part here i live (north of Lyon), many time where fog at beginning of the day is very strong! But i love this feeling to be alone and with a high danger, because you don't know where are the other cars and trucks. You must take care!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
9th Dec 2013 10:03pm
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9th Dec 2013 10:26pm
The most mystical and thrilling souvenir I have is not fog, but sand storm in desert in sahara! Similar to fog, except more mystical and worst because you have sand all in your face, your eyes, your mouth...
Anonymous
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11th Dec 2013 7:25am
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11th Dec 2013 8:09am
I waited your comment with anxiety and I am very glad of this one, thank you Vee.
For fun, I have found an anagram of the first stanza : "Realy tip in frog"!
For fun, I have found an anagram of the first stanza : "Realy tip in frog"!
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
11th Dec 2013 8:15am
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11th Dec 2013 8:33am
I love this quote of Nicolas Boileau (French poet 1636-1711) from "l'Art Poétique" (the translation is probably not good) :
"More haste less speed; and, without losing heart,
"Twenty times on the job put back your work:
"Polish it ceaselessly and re-polish it;
"Sometimes add, and often erase"
For poetry and Haiku, it is needed.
"More haste less speed; and, without losing heart,
"Twenty times on the job put back your work:
"Polish it ceaselessly and re-polish it;
"Sometimes add, and often erase"
For poetry and Haiku, it is needed.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
11th Dec 2013 8:36am
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11th Dec 2013 1:12pm