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A love like mine
(Look at me, writing love poems!...pretty sure i could make a pizza with all this cheese)
With a love like mine
You’ll often lose time
Counting only to the beat of his heart.
You’ll never want to move
Out from the warm grove
His body makes holding yours.
And the smell of his skin
More alcoholic than gin
Has you delirious for days.
Because my love is the kind
That makes me lose my mind
Knowing without it I’ll never love again.
With a love like mine
You’ll often lose time
Counting only to the beat of his heart.
You’ll never want to move
Out from the warm grove
His body makes holding yours.
And the smell of his skin
More alcoholic than gin
Has you delirious for days.
Because my love is the kind
That makes me lose my mind
Knowing without it I’ll never love again.
Published 9th Dec 2013
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- Edited 13th May 2018 9:38pm
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10th Dec 2013 7:35pm
Very nice and filled with confidence of the best kind...your line at the very top made me laugh lol! I loved this :-)
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31st Dec 2013 4:02am
You are truly a poetess, ma'am, and in the way that me telling you is already oblivious to your abilities. Make sure you read that important message I sent you.
8th Jan 2014 5:13pm
Thank you friend. Your sweet comments and messages are always appreciated. I read your message.