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Surrender
Lips full and plump
aching to be kissed
with such fiery passion
Haunted by explosive
wet kisses I surrender to
the comfort each time
aching to be kissed
with such fiery passion
Haunted by explosive
wet kisses I surrender to
the comfort each time
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Re: Surrender
6th Dec 2013 3:14am
Sometimes kissing can be as fulfilling as sex...I still remember the taste of past and infrequent present kisses. Thank you for reminding me of this beauty! Wonderful write!
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6th Dec 2013 3:19am
A kiss is just so beautiful and personal ...the head tilt, hands on the face, hands in the hair, a kiss can never fade.Thanks GW ;)
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6th Dec 2013 3:56am
And you forgot looking into those sapphire eyes...oh that's right that would be a pleasure experienced by me...I mean whoever....doh!
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