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the curse of dreams
it is said that dreams are doors to what you love
a life of peace
a life of happiness
but what if those doors closed?
where do we go?
are we still in a dream?
did the happiness fade?
are we empty?
all of these questions that repeat and await an answer
where am i?
am i dead?
what is this place?
can anybody hear me?
the dreams make you never want to awake
but what if they were never there?
a life of peace
a life of happiness
but what if those doors closed?
where do we go?
are we still in a dream?
did the happiness fade?
are we empty?
all of these questions that repeat and await an answer
where am i?
am i dead?
what is this place?
can anybody hear me?
the dreams make you never want to awake
but what if they were never there?
Published 5th Dec 2013
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5th Dec 2013 8:47pm
I've barely had any dream
wherein I wouldn't die.
Death catches my curiosity as well.
How shall we differentiate
death from dreams when in death?
Nice write.
wherein I wouldn't die.
Death catches my curiosity as well.
How shall we differentiate
death from dreams when in death?
Nice write.
6th Dec 2013 4:47pm
9th Dec 2013 6:02am
Ooooh, shivers, insightful poem. I enjoy your questioning nature. Oh, question more, Question more, make me shiver to the bone! :).
9th Dec 2013 7:35pm
10th Dec 2013 7:46pm
This was very dark and thought provoking.
I really enjoyed the themes you used, and the imagery.
I really enjoyed the themes you used, and the imagery.
10th Dec 2013 7:51pm
12th Dec 2013 4:14am
Sometimes it's the questions we ask that drives us forward. Keep asking brother. If enough of us ask you never know. An answer or two may develop. Thanks for your share.
12th Dec 2013 4:21am