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she
funeral hymns
attached with Psalms 23
tears
some of relief
some of regret
some of remorse
of treating her badly
questions of her faith
placed in the air
in the moment of silence
words left behind
start adding up
leaving pieces to the puzzle
that will now be completed
not that she wants to leave
understanding
life forms from death
love forms from pain
the same ones prosecuting her
are the same ones
she's dying to save
her journey is ending
curtains are closing
no fear as she leaves
on the other side waiting
is love
she
could never perfect
the love she waited for
searched for in this realm
it is on the other side
while you mourn for her
love will be created
as earth returns to form
and you lay your tears on her
the SON will come out and shine
and the flowers will spring forth
PERFECT LOVE CAST OUT FEAR
attached with Psalms 23
tears
some of relief
some of regret
some of remorse
of treating her badly
questions of her faith
placed in the air
in the moment of silence
words left behind
start adding up
leaving pieces to the puzzle
that will now be completed
not that she wants to leave
understanding
life forms from death
love forms from pain
the same ones prosecuting her
are the same ones
she's dying to save
her journey is ending
curtains are closing
no fear as she leaves
on the other side waiting
is love
she
could never perfect
the love she waited for
searched for in this realm
it is on the other side
while you mourn for her
love will be created
as earth returns to form
and you lay your tears on her
the SON will come out and shine
and the flowers will spring forth
PERFECT LOVE CAST OUT FEAR
Published 5th Dec 2013
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5th Dec 2013 2:36am
Touched by your HOTTNESS!!!
Great write sweets!!!
Loved the read!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write sweets!!!
Loved the read!!!
Sir Lancelott
5th Dec 2013 2:42am
5th Dec 2013 4:05am
love on the other side. I see it transpiring in a chapel, as the organ plays...
5th Dec 2013 5:26am
"life forms from death/love forms from pain"...I said in an earlier comment that the One True God is Death, & while I do believe that, it is not necessarily a negative belief. Death comes to claim us all, but it's the cycle that ultimately trumps it in the long term...all things continue on in some form or another. In my opinion, we are all cosmic dust-to-be, but everything will continue to be, & nothing (or no one) will completely disappear. I sense strength, courage, (&, even greater) HOPE in this write. No fear. You speak to the eternal beauty that is "she". Excellent pen, Hotness. Hope you catch her on the Other Side.
8th Dec 2013 5:59pm
Amazingly done my fiend. It's so touching, with a message that shows to me life after death. You write with such passion and belief. Thank you for this beautifully penned piece.
