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The Nursery Rhyme Diaries...2
Lil' Bo Peep
Lil' Bo Peep
she's lost like sheep
herded far astray...
Lil' Bo Peep
could barely sleep
from running the streets all day...
But one day it so happened
her 'roll' was slowed, like it often do
when she had 'caught' something
from 'john' yet he quickly was gone
as inside a seed slowly grew...
Yet, her pimp wasn't pleased
treated her 'state' like a disease,
he had to kill off by any means...
spewing, "bitch, you ain't fucking
up my green..!"
Without warning, he pulled out a blade,
n' slit her open wide,
then left her in an alley to die,
a victim of his latest homicide...
But Lil' Bo Peep
wouldn't ' sleep'
n' staggered four blocks
down the street...
Now, three years later, she's
stronger, n' no longer sellin'
her body, but can't conceive
still, the scars...
are all hers to keep...
Lil' Bo Peep
she's lost like sheep
herded far astray...
Lil' Bo Peep
could barely sleep
from running the streets all day...
But one day it so happened
her 'roll' was slowed, like it often do
when she had 'caught' something
from 'john' yet he quickly was gone
as inside a seed slowly grew...
Yet, her pimp wasn't pleased
treated her 'state' like a disease,
he had to kill off by any means...
spewing, "bitch, you ain't fucking
up my green..!"
Without warning, he pulled out a blade,
n' slit her open wide,
then left her in an alley to die,
a victim of his latest homicide...
But Lil' Bo Peep
wouldn't ' sleep'
n' staggered four blocks
down the street...
Now, three years later, she's
stronger, n' no longer sellin'
her body, but can't conceive
still, the scars...
are all hers to keep...
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
4th Dec 2013 6:22pm
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4th Dec 2013 7:52pm
Well, You n I both know everything ain't roses n apple pie right? I'm happy you got thru this dark ink n still could leave sweet words, thank u :) appreciate u lady
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4th Dec 2013 7:19pm
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4th Dec 2013 7:57pm
Yea, I guess it is huh? lol good thing it didn't get gory! lol
jk... Gotta lighten the mood here... Thank you my dear, appreciate u so much :)
jk... Gotta lighten the mood here... Thank you my dear, appreciate u so much :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 9:46pm
4th Dec 2013 7:29pm
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4th Dec 2013 7:58pm
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2013 7:45pm
... such an amazing storyteller, with a wicked, twisted and insane mind; in a good way of course....;) Lil' Bo Peep will never be the same again in my eyes.....Xo Pen Love~
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4th Dec 2013 8:00pm
Insane mind huh? Maybe I should change my bane huh? How about NUTSO! or LOONY GOON lol
seriously, thank u for ur forever wonderful commentary n support always my sweet Rain :)
seriously, thank u for ur forever wonderful commentary n support always my sweet Rain :)
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2013 8:07pm
...yes, insane rocks! Sanity is so over-rated. ;)
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6th Dec 2013 1:58pm
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4th Dec 2013 8:16pm
I was going to say crazy but i'll go with Rain and say insane...Well done Mr.P :)
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6th Dec 2013 1:59pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:57pm
5th Dec 2013 7:39pm
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6th Dec 2013 2:02pm
Lmao me? Moody!? What the hell's that supposed to mean!? lmao jk bro! Nah I'm just creative n like to change it up
just to to keep it interesting :) thank you tons, truly deeply aplreciate you always bro! :) peace n love to you n yours
just to to keep it interesting :) thank you tons, truly deeply aplreciate you always bro! :) peace n love to you n yours
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
6th Dec 2013 9:50am
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6th Dec 2013 2:04pm
Dark I know, but really just putting out there things I know for a fact had n has happened out there in the streets especially from where I grew up... Using the fairy tale twist was only to make it HOPEFULLY, "not run of the mill" thanks a bunch...appreciate u :)
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8th Dec 2013 6:19pm
A Nursery Rhyme in a way you sinned it, is so true to life. As many who've experienced your concept can relate to. Nicely done my friend, nicely done!
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8th Dec 2013 6:28pm
Yup, though not 100% fact it's definitely based on what happens in a lot of cities in this country... Thank u bro!