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Not Good Enough
I wrote a poem
for you today
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
words of love
spilled onto paper
pain and joy
desire and fear
all for you,
but my love
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
I crumpled it up
and threw it away.
for you today
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
words of love
spilled onto paper
pain and joy
desire and fear
all for you,
but my love
just as a million
poets have done
before this one
I crumpled it up
and threw it away.
Published 4th Dec 2013
| Edited 7th Jan 2014
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4th Dec 2013 1:15am
Freaking BRILLIANT!! Truly never saw that ending! Go on with your bad self bro! Loved this :)
4th Dec 2013 1:31am
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2013 1:28am
4th Dec 2013 1:27am
Love it Hash! Sometimes those we toss away are the ones needing to be read and received...Xo
Felt this one...
Felt this one...
4th Dec 2013 1:32am
4th Dec 2013 1:46am
You should never throw them away because at times going back with a different perspective makes you realize that they were better than you thought!
4th Dec 2013 2:42am
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4th Dec 2013 2:57pm
next time dont threw it away, what is not good enough for beloved can be good enough for us, your fellow-poets..)
4th Dec 2013 8:03pm
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4th Dec 2013 9:10pm
The one for whom it was written
surely would have liked it ...
It's an awesome poem, Hash.
surely would have liked it ...
It's an awesome poem, Hash.
4th Dec 2013 10:46pm
Yea Miss Chi,no one special...just a lonely heart sitting here with Hank Williams crying in my beer lol peace and thank you always :)
4th Dec 2013 9:27pm
I am a huge fan of love poems, so I went for this in a big way. You did a fine job with the tone of this poem, the hopefulness, the fear of rejection.
I missed the punctuation, but no big deal. Very fine writing.
Heart
I missed the punctuation, but no big deal. Very fine writing.
Heart
4th Dec 2013 10:49pm
Thanks hollyrene,you make me smile :)...sometimes i like to leave all the marks out,cause to tell the truth never know where to put them (peace and love to you)
4th Dec 2013 11:05pm
excellence and a loving smile Here Hash...I think many Writes look better without those pesky eyelashes and such...plus lets a reader pause where they feel is right for their particular rhythm...always the goods Sir!!!
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