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< a wash of dishes >
a prayer
a pledge
amid the dishes said
submerged it waits
an edge
a shiny sharpness felt
as gray at first then red
a bitterness baptized by me
a sour sacrament set free
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Published 29th Nov 2013
| Edited 14th Dec 2013
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29th Nov 2013 12:27pm
mmmm....last 4 lines
make
this'n
a fine
clarity of ambiguity......which I much prefer
to socalled obvious
'truths'
which most often aint
true at all
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Jan 2019 10:35am
29th Nov 2013 2:13pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 7:37pm
2nd Dec 2013 1:12am
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