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The Poet's Quill
As the poet lays his warm quill against my soul
the icy winds whisper his secrets to me, time and again.
I bestow these emotions then cast them out through screaming eyes.
My wounding cry not denied of words laced in pain's simplicity.
I tread lightly upon his grey, shard, littered path of misery,
minding the strokes.
TIS my road, barbed in poetic sensory.
As the dance sleeps; the song plays on.
I'm cold, masked in warmth. It's my only warning, I give freely.[/font]
the icy winds whisper his secrets to me, time and again.
I bestow these emotions then cast them out through screaming eyes.
My wounding cry not denied of words laced in pain's simplicity.
I tread lightly upon his grey, shard, littered path of misery,
minding the strokes.
TIS my road, barbed in poetic sensory.
As the dance sleeps; the song plays on.
I'm cold, masked in warmth. It's my only warning, I give freely.[/font]
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Re: The Poet's Quill
27th Nov 2013 2:47pm
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27th Nov 2013 2:51pm
Re: The Poet's Quill
27th Nov 2013 4:08pm
A true poetess!
Not everyone who
Claims to be POETIC
ARE!
But u Blue Angel have.the
Gift of words for Humankind
Enjoyed SUN£IT€→The Poet
Not everyone who
Claims to be POETIC
ARE!
But u Blue Angel have.the
Gift of words for Humankind
Enjoyed SUN£IT€→The Poet
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27th Nov 2013 6:15pm
Formerly RefineminD
Now SUNLITE the poet
To keep my ink Fresh &ORIGINAL!!!!
Now SUNLITE the poet
To keep my ink Fresh &ORIGINAL!!!!
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re: Re: The Poet's Quill
27th Nov 2013 4:27pm
Reflecting the poet's soul, bares many treasure, as we know. :) *Thank you, Crim... sincerely*
Re: The Poet's Quill
27th Nov 2013 4:49pm
The first line perfectly illustrates a poet's desire to deeply touch another...at least as deep as the place from where the words were mined from their own soul.
Bravisima poeta!
Bravisima poeta!
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27th Nov 2013 5:18pm
Re: The Poet's Quill
28th Nov 2013 00:11am
as I delve further into this, I find a recurring battle between the warm embrace of poetry & the impenetrable chill that cloaks the speaker. the mask is a hollow allure, thus the warning...
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28th Nov 2013 4:04pm
Thank you sincerely, John :) You have such a perceptive ability to see poetry in its rawest form. I adore that in you.
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Re: The Poet's Quill
17th Jan 2014 8:22pm
blue angel, its a trilling capture by poet's quill what the person "I" express, if i right understood..
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re: Re: The Poet's Quill
17th Jan 2014 9:41pm
Yes, yes indeed. You have captured the essence of it nicely, utenaka... Thank you, deeply :)
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