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Cancer
Effecting not only where it dwells
It wraps its nasty grip on everyone around
It is a battle
A fight like no other
It rears its disgusting boldness
When you don’t expect it
Surprised
Dishearten is more like it
It kills the very being of a person
Use to be strong and active
Now, no will to live
Cancer
Sucks
It wraps its nasty grip on everyone around
It is a battle
A fight like no other
It rears its disgusting boldness
When you don’t expect it
Surprised
Dishearten is more like it
It kills the very being of a person
Use to be strong and active
Now, no will to live
Cancer
Sucks
Published 29th Jan 2011
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17th Apr 2012 10:42pm
This is a poem full of truth. you did well capturing this.... my only comment is that your last line doesnt seem to fit...
"Cancer Sucks"
i think that maybe if you took it out this piece would be better... that is my opinion of course.
"Cancer Sucks"
i think that maybe if you took it out this piece would be better... that is my opinion of course.
17th Apr 2012 10:52pm
Thank you. This was written for my brother so it will stay as it is for the moment. Thank you again.
17th Apr 2012 11:45pm
Well your piece is very lovely. not the subject i mean, because with this particular subject, there is nothing lovely or good about it... but your emotion in this was what I loved.