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Ode to Agony
I feel your sweet agony
though it's not my intent...
I eat from soil
that's tainted with sin
my tongue twists
blackened words begin
you clamor and shake
against cold winds of time
tattered and tormented
is your flames design
your presence scatters
the thieves, back
into their darkness
for fear of your wrath
no time for pestilence
indulgence so brutal
I tremble beneath you ~
When it's all over,
sweet agony becomes you...
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Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 1:55pm
Holy smokes!! This was outstanding! Dark, n forboding tone
But truly enjoyable my friend :)
But truly enjoyable my friend :)
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re: Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 2:25pm
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21st Nov 2013 3:24pm
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re: Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 3:27pm
Thank you, with eyes wide open in the dark, to feel the loveliness that resides there :)
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re: Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 3:58pm
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Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 4:49pm
" When it's all over,
sweet agony becomes you..."
Excellent lines to end on. Very exciting read.
Very dark, indeed
sweet agony becomes you..."
Excellent lines to end on. Very exciting read.
Very dark, indeed
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21st Nov 2013 5:18pm
Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 8:01pm
seduction offered. the color & stark photo contrast against each other, like pain & pleasure, fear & desire. your poem is beautiful in its illustrious shadow, Angel...
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re: Re: Ode to Agony
21st Nov 2013 8:05pm
Your gleanings from which it was born tells the tale, John, curtsy to you:)
Re: Ode to Agony
11th Dec 2013 3:12pm
You have a gift girl. There's passion in every write. Inspirational. Thank you again.
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11th Dec 2013 3:16pm