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Undying Love
“Hearts beat faster
love flows and rivers grow
how to be brave in such times
with enduring passion
with broken hearts nowhere in sight
and hearts beating out of time
love me for all time
a thousand years
and a thousand more
lovers love
like there’s no-more time
hearts beat faster
within
a thousand years
and a thousand more
lovers love
like there’s no-more I love you's
Love me
for a thousand years
and a thousand more
Passions rise
show me your existing beauty
and your undying love
and never forsaken mine
Please
hold on tight to my ever changing heart
and know my undying love
will never forsaken your’s”
love flows and rivers grow
how to be brave in such times
with enduring passion
with broken hearts nowhere in sight
and hearts beating out of time
love me for all time
a thousand years
and a thousand more
lovers love
like there’s no-more time
hearts beat faster
within
a thousand years
and a thousand more
lovers love
like there’s no-more I love you's
Love me
for a thousand years
and a thousand more
Passions rise
show me your existing beauty
and your undying love
and never forsaken mine
Please
hold on tight to my ever changing heart
and know my undying love
will never forsaken your’s”
Published 21st Nov 2013
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21st Nov 2013 1:16am
25th Nov 2013 5:42pm
21st Nov 2013 3:02pm
This poem of yours, not only did I enjoy, but it gave me such a peaceful, reassured feeling. I started to imagine what it would be like to be in love for all of eternity, where it never ceases, but just continues to grow in strength, passion, and impact...you get lost in it, however as long as your sharing the experience with God (that's who I thought of when reading), the fact that you got lost almost doesn't matter because you're onto a better feeling than before; the euphoric high never stops.
I really liked this part of the poem: "show me your existing beauty and your undying love and never forsake mine"...I thought about how we, as humans, never truly become complacent and a part of us always wants something better yet God provides that as he is infinite...our quench for something greater never gets filled because there's something to always be in awe of!
Anywho, I loved it!
I really liked this part of the poem: "show me your existing beauty and your undying love and never forsake mine"...I thought about how we, as humans, never truly become complacent and a part of us always wants something better yet God provides that as he is infinite...our quench for something greater never gets filled because there's something to always be in awe of!
Anywho, I loved it!
25th Nov 2013 5:47pm
Thank you for commenting and I'm glad you liked it.
God is love and I have been through a lot in my life if it wasn't for the grace of God I would not be alive today to share my poetic gift. "Through God all things are eternal and peace is within us all through his grace." :)
God is love and I have been through a lot in my life if it wasn't for the grace of God I would not be alive today to share my poetic gift. "Through God all things are eternal and peace is within us all through his grace." :)
31st Dec 2013 8:37am
This was a beautifully written poem an I really enjoyed reading It. Magnificent work.
20th Jan 2014 6:30am