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...But I know this much...
Like exhibits in a zoo...
they roam around
yet feel caged...
Utterances
in nonsense
makes no sense
in this discombobulation
of downtrodden flesh...
They gather in herds
for a glimpse of hope,
that tomorrow's trek
will offer up some light
at the mouth of life's
darkened tunnel...
though the biggest obstacle
for anyone to their successes
is an 'excess' of the lack
of mental comprehension...
which speaks
to the simple fact
that in order to have a chance,
at a sturdier life foundation
we all need to take a glance
at a "never ending..." education...
they roam around
yet feel caged...
Utterances
in nonsense
makes no sense
in this discombobulation
of downtrodden flesh...
They gather in herds
for a glimpse of hope,
that tomorrow's trek
will offer up some light
at the mouth of life's
darkened tunnel...
though the biggest obstacle
for anyone to their successes
is an 'excess' of the lack
of mental comprehension...
which speaks
to the simple fact
that in order to have a chance,
at a sturdier life foundation
we all need to take a glance
at a "never ending..." education...
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- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
20th Nov 2013 2:52pm
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20th Nov 2013 3:01pm
Thank you Crim... So sweet of you to say n yes I agree I try to learn n RETAIN what I everyday! Of course with CRS disease
is pretty difficult! lol
is pretty difficult! lol
Anonymous
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20th Nov 2013 3:48pm
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20th Nov 2013 4:03pm
Thank you sweetness, yea definitely true know how n when to apply them also is a must :)appreciate your thoughts on my ink :)
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20th Nov 2013 4:07pm
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20th Nov 2013 4:10pm
You're write it is right! Lol thank you, truly appreciate your reading n leaving a thought on my piece :)
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20th Nov 2013 4:14pm
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20th Nov 2013 4:30pm
Lol aaaawww yea ever now n agin I git a lil spark
der n I let it spill lol thank u my dear lady! :)
der n I let it spill lol thank u my dear lady! :)
Anonymous
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20th Nov 2013 5:54pm
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20th Nov 2013 5:56pm
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 10:08pm
Professor Poe teaching the masses....lol....
Love it! Xo
Love it! Xo
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21st Nov 2013 00:26am
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21st Nov 2013 5:10pm
"which speaks
to the simple fact
that in order to have a chance,
at a sturdier life foundation
we all need to take a glance
at a "never ending..." education..." Love this!!! Never ending!!!!!
to the simple fact
that in order to have a chance,
at a sturdier life foundation
we all need to take a glance
at a "never ending..." education..." Love this!!! Never ending!!!!!
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21st Nov 2013 5:29pm
Aaaawww my sweet Nik! You make me smile :)
Thank you so much! Appreciate you
Thank you so much! Appreciate you
Re: ...But I know this much...
22nd Nov 2013 7:27am
wish i had a teacher like you at school ;)
great words used there...where's my dictionary! :P
great words used there...where's my dictionary! :P
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22nd Nov 2013 1:52pm
Aaaawwww you're sweet! Thank you n here, you can mine! lol
Truly appreciate u always :)
Truly appreciate u always :)
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24th Nov 2013 4:57pm