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Do Me Right
I want it…are you ready?
I do not want a novice
playing at being the big man.
If you can please me
and do me right,
then step up and say
“here I am baby all for you tonight!”
I need someone who can,
someone who will keep me satisfied.
Do me right baby…
You do not have to warn me baby,
I aint scared, if you wanna play
you better come prepared,
because that’s the reason
I am nobody's wife,
I want what I want, when I want it
and if step to me, you gotta be ready.
Because I am hungry
and its time to get crunk,
she is purring already!
Do me right baby…
How real is it for you?
It is very real for me;
a man who thinks he can please me
and give me everything I need
will get that and then some in return,
guaranteed!
So give it to me right,
or don't give it at all,
but if you feelin froggy… jump!
Do me right baby…
Oh my… Baby in my fantasy
you so get it right,
then I just cannot forget
how good it was,
how it felt, you make me
want you so much t
hat I have to touch myself.
I don't want it all the time,
but when I want it…
Baby do me right …
Gypsy Red
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Re: Do Me Right
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 9:29pm
Do me right or don't do me at all! :) Sexy as usual, Red! Your pen stays smokin' girl....Xo
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re: Re: Do Me Right
19th Nov 2013 9:58pm
Hahah (wheew, blows the tip of the pen)yeah baby you know how we do the do lol hahaha thanks ma!!!
Red
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19th Nov 2013 10:46pm
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19th Nov 2013 11:21pm
Well SW baby hang on to your shorts if you liked this one I have another one coming that's smokin hot! Lol thanks for the great comment!
Red
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Re: Do Me Right
20th Nov 2013 2:22am
Do you right huh? Hhhhmmm makes me wonder
all it might take to satisfy such a hunger kitty lol
but hell it sure was sexy as a mofo visualingbitvthecwhole way lol
all it might take to satisfy such a hunger kitty lol
but hell it sure was sexy as a mofo visualingbitvthecwhole way lol
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20th Nov 2013 2:47am
Did ya visualize it good baby?... It ain't no fun if you did not feel it in the gut lolol The million dollar question is: what would it take?... Lol
Naughty Poe!!!
Red
Naughty Poe!!!
Red
Re: Do Me Right
31st Jan 2014 5:05pm
What a great read, nothing sexier than a woman that knows what she wants, and getting what she wants.
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31st Jan 2014 9:39pm
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re: Re: Do Me Right
13th Feb 2014 7:33pm
;) lol too funny!! Thank you so much! Glad the voodoo that I do was good to you! Lol
Red
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