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Razor Blade Heart Strings
It's okay to weave golden dreams
on silken, heartless sleeves.
and it's okay to carve poetry
upon razor blade heart strings.
just remember the voice that whispered
upon the wintry breeze. Yes, the one you never figured
would climb so deep within your layers
and leave you to frolic among the players.
She smiles when the pain consumes her
and hastily releases the icy hand that implores.
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~
on silken, heartless sleeves.
and it's okay to carve poetry
upon razor blade heart strings.
just remember the voice that whispered
upon the wintry breeze. Yes, the one you never figured
would climb so deep within your layers
and leave you to frolic among the players.
She smiles when the pain consumes her
and hastily releases the icy hand that implores.
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~
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Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 6:36am
I'm warming my hands, Angel, & reaching for your poetry of perdition...
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re: Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 6:38am
Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 6:38am
Wow sweets that was a Great piece!!
I truly enjoyed the read!!!!
Awesome ink sweets!
Sir Lancelott
I truly enjoyed the read!!!!
Awesome ink sweets!
Sir Lancelott
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19th Nov 2013 6:40am
Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 7:09am
Blue, this is a wonderfully haunting piece...beautifully written. I enjoy drawing my own interpretations of your words :)
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19th Nov 2013 7:18am
Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 9:16am
re: Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 12:51pm
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19th Nov 2013 11:08am
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19th Nov 2013 12:54pm
Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 1:53pm
" and it's okay to carve poetry upon razor blade heartstrings " << favorite line. Love the prophetic style of this one, really leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions from it. A joy to read.
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19th Nov 2013 3:07pm
Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 1:59pm
I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!! So amazing!
"and it's okay to carve poetry
upon razor blade heart strings. "
Love this line!!! Absolutely stunning!!!!!
"and it's okay to carve poetry
upon razor blade heart strings. "
Love this line!!! Absolutely stunning!!!!!
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re: Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 3:08pm
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19th Nov 2013 3:10pm
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re: Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 3:12pm
Re: Razor Blade Heart Strings
19th Nov 2013 6:00pm
You're so good my friend! So gifted with your pen
This truly 'sent' me! :)
This truly 'sent' me! :)
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19th Nov 2013 6:05pm