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Discarded
A broken down rusty can
in the middle of the road
kicked around and beat up
once full of life,full of joy
bringing happiness and pleasure.
But now no more,all gone
the sparkle,the bubbles,the life
sucked right out of it
tossed aside and forgotten
stepped on,crunched up and run over.
But still there,lying in the gutter
that broken down rusty can
just wanting to be full again.
in the middle of the road
kicked around and beat up
once full of life,full of joy
bringing happiness and pleasure.
But now no more,all gone
the sparkle,the bubbles,the life
sucked right out of it
tossed aside and forgotten
stepped on,crunched up and run over.
But still there,lying in the gutter
that broken down rusty can
just wanting to be full again.
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Re: Discarded
23rd Nov 2013 4:35pm
A scary parallelism to human beings.
Sometimes we're discarded, too.
Sometimes we're filled again.
Sometimes we just are waiting
and waiting ...
I love that poem, it's so
brilliantly crafted.
Sometimes we're discarded, too.
Sometimes we're filled again.
Sometimes we just are waiting
and waiting ...
I love that poem, it's so
brilliantly crafted.
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24th Nov 2013 10:41pm
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 9:11pm
What a beautiful vigorous and deep analogy painting here. This can; appearing to be a discarded person, was detailed flawlessly Hash!
Bravo....Xo
Bravo....Xo
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28th Nov 2013 00:27am
Superb...great analogy, kicked to the curb, left..hoping to be filled...ahhh...the perils of life
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