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Darkside of the moon

Whispered shadows
across the wall
moonlit sighs
moaning pleasure

Skin seeks heat
from hidden depths
pulsing rhythmic
time in motion

Glistening beads
abundant aromas
abandoned kisses
shameless sin

Join me there
we linger forever
seducing the darkside
of the moon

Written by softtoy

Published 18th Nov 2013

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Re: Darkside of the moon

SoulMine

18th Nov 2013 8:29am

I like this poem. I am trying to learn some of the technical tricks involved in poetry writing. This poem seems to follow a pattern which makes it roll of the tongue easier when read aloud. Each of the four sections seems to have it's own internal logic. The 3rd section is like quick observations, each beginning w/ an adjective or adverb:
Glistening beads
abundant aromas
abandoned kisses
shameless sins
The fourth section seems to be one long statement; the goal of the poem & your romance:
Join me there
we linger forever
seducing the dark side
of the moon.

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