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Love St.
Bewildered and befuddled...
cruising down the highway
everything so smooth
then from nowhere
in the middle of the road
a bump and a dip
tossed around
up and down
bruised and shattered
will I ever know,
got to let it go.
cruising down the highway
everything so smooth
then from nowhere
in the middle of the road
a bump and a dip
tossed around
up and down
bruised and shattered
will I ever know,
got to let it go.
Published 17th Nov 2013
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17th Nov 2013 8:34pm
A wonderful metaphoric write, Hashman.
Love isn't always a smoothe lane, some bumps
may just intensify the ride ...
Love isn't always a smoothe lane, some bumps
may just intensify the ride ...
17th Nov 2013 9:43pm
Nothing like a little pain to bring pleasure ;)...thank you Miss Chi,love saying that Miss Chi(ha)...so many different thoughts it brings to me.Mysterious,studious,love,danger and more.(sorry,must be the incense) :)
Quoi? That Miss Chi(ha) (your special Miss Chi? Not me for sure!) brings you yo many wonderful thoughts? Must be she (Chi) and not the inscense :-)! Haha Ha...sh!
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17th Nov 2013 11:48pm
that's a really good
read, Hash...perhaps
let her have the
driving seat for
a while..:)
read, Hash...perhaps
let her have the
driving seat for
a while..:)
18th Nov 2013 1:10am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 7:35pm
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