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Emancipated Life
There is a life she lives within her own,
This life emancipated, a life unknown
She shares this life with one other,
Sworn to secrecy, don't dare tell another
He breathes on her neck like breezes so mild,
Passion intense, desires run wild
Thoughtless of anything beyond his chocolate skin,
So careless, she commits the ultimate sin
Time for this life to be put to sleep,
He is a husband, not hers to keep
This life emancipated, a life unknown
She shares this life with one other,
Sworn to secrecy, don't dare tell another
He breathes on her neck like breezes so mild,
Passion intense, desires run wild
Thoughtless of anything beyond his chocolate skin,
So careless, she commits the ultimate sin
Time for this life to be put to sleep,
He is a husband, not hers to keep
Published 14th Nov 2013
| Edited 15th Dec 2013
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14th Nov 2013 5:27pm
Oooohhhh there's a bitter sweetness to this
n I'd dare say at least for the moment that guy
likely felt lucky as hell. :)
n I'd dare say at least for the moment that guy
likely felt lucky as hell. :)
14th Nov 2013 8:38pm
You think so? It's definitely bittersweet. Thank you again for your comments Poetikmind :-)
15th Dec 2013 11:35pm
I was taken aback by the ending and loved every minute of it although I also felt it's bittersweet taste on my tongue.
16th Dec 2013 8:16am
16th Dec 2013 9:20pm
16th Dec 2013 11:16pm
Hey VC,do you agree with Poetikmind? Do you think this guy felt lucky as hell?