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The Sky Cries
The sky is crying
To cleanse away
The sins of today
And make anew
The canvas of tomorrow
The sky is crying
At the horrific scenes
Played upon the land
Cruel and blood ridden
Man upon fellow man
The sky is crying
For the hope that ebbs away
And no savior in sight
The sky is crying
For the coming
Of our twilight
To cleanse away
The sins of today
And make anew
The canvas of tomorrow
The sky is crying
At the horrific scenes
Played upon the land
Cruel and blood ridden
Man upon fellow man
The sky is crying
For the hope that ebbs away
And no savior in sight
The sky is crying
For the coming
Of our twilight
Published 13th Nov 2013
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14th Nov 2013 11:09am
This is lovely.
I imagined it raining as I read this.
Oh, how the sky would cry
cleansing us of our guilt of sin
as it seems to pity.
great piece
I imagined it raining as I read this.
Oh, how the sky would cry
cleansing us of our guilt of sin
as it seems to pity.
great piece
14th Nov 2013 10:51pm
Yes it pities how we treat our fellow man. How we destroy instead of create. Thank you.
14th Nov 2013 1:15pm
Very well written, a truly beautiful peace
when I was reading through it the first thing came to mind was the sky crying is Gods tears, as if he's powerless to do anything and all he can do is watch as it all happens.
I really enjoyed this piece you've done an excellent job when writing it
when I was reading through it the first thing came to mind was the sky crying is Gods tears, as if he's powerless to do anything and all he can do is watch as it all happens.
I really enjoyed this piece you've done an excellent job when writing it
14th Nov 2013 10:55pm
14th Nov 2013 9:27pm