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A Solitary Goodbye
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
The ticking of the clock
to me,
is like a time bomb.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
It rings in my ears,
It's the only thing,
I seem to hear,
as the blade
slicing through my veins,
and consciousness slowly,
starts to disappear.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
The beating of my heart,
slows down, as my breath becomes,
short-ed,
gasps.
Time re-lapse.
No time to recover,
this time..
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
The last color my eyes see,
is the red liquid leaking out,
from me.
Oh! Fate.
Destiny,
has become,
me.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
Not a soul,
to wish me a tearful 'Goodbye.'
Just silence, overwhelms,
the little life,
that I hold on to,
at this moment in time.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
For this is the moment I die,
and with my last sigh,
I breathe my last breath,
on the door,
eternal sleep knocks,
as the clock
keeps the steady beat of...
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
The ticking of the clock
to me,
is like a time bomb.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
It rings in my ears,
It's the only thing,
I seem to hear,
as the blade
slicing through my veins,
and consciousness slowly,
starts to disappear.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
The beating of my heart,
slows down, as my breath becomes,
short-ed,
gasps.
Time re-lapse.
No time to recover,
this time..
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
The last color my eyes see,
is the red liquid leaking out,
from me.
Oh! Fate.
Destiny,
has become,
me.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
Not a soul,
to wish me a tearful 'Goodbye.'
Just silence, overwhelms,
the little life,
that I hold on to,
at this moment in time.
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
For this is the moment I die,
and with my last sigh,
I breathe my last breath,
on the door,
eternal sleep knocks,
as the clock
keeps the steady beat of...
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
Published 11th Nov 2013
| Edited 4th Jan 2014
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11th Nov 2013 10:48am
Destiny has become me ... Incredible line. And I like that you've left how this person came to this moment open to the reader.
LSP
LSP
11th Nov 2013 10:04pm
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11th Nov 2013 10:05pm
11th Nov 2013 12:56pm
11th Nov 2013 10:07pm
You Honor me too much.
Thank you so much CerealKillah.
It means a lot
Thank you so much CerealKillah.
It means a lot
11th Nov 2013 1:41pm
11th Nov 2013 10:07pm
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11th Nov 2013 10:11pm
Thank You my friend.
I'm glad you liked it as much as I like your pieces as well.
I'm glad you liked it as much as I like your pieces as well.