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Begging Beaivi
Summer Fay bid bye bedding down
dragonfly's sleep
under faerie, tail, wing
curling deep to hidden slumber
slipping adrift gossamers dreams
Winter sprites open eyes slowly
to beats of Druidic murmurings
slow steady rhythms that leave
Oak, Elm and Ash bide, bare brown
descent degrees, floated falling snowflake
Batter butter for Beiwe upon the post
ring round ribbons, roasting white tailed meat
bring back Mother Sun, sanity, safety for everyone
these screams we soon do lay, at Her feet on darkest day
as nighttime rides silver sky we huddle warmth of hearth
Frozen, we people are humbled
set upon sleigh, slick to sliding
held at point by daggers of ice
while teeth borne of winds, gnash at our skin.
Snow drifts build as faerie chilled laugh, frosts everclear
dragonfly's sleep
under faerie, tail, wing
curling deep to hidden slumber
slipping adrift gossamers dreams
Winter sprites open eyes slowly
to beats of Druidic murmurings
slow steady rhythms that leave
Oak, Elm and Ash bide, bare brown
descent degrees, floated falling snowflake
Batter butter for Beiwe upon the post
ring round ribbons, roasting white tailed meat
bring back Mother Sun, sanity, safety for everyone
these screams we soon do lay, at Her feet on darkest day
as nighttime rides silver sky we huddle warmth of hearth
Frozen, we people are humbled
set upon sleigh, slick to sliding
held at point by daggers of ice
while teeth borne of winds, gnash at our skin.
Snow drifts build as faerie chilled laugh, frosts everclear
Published 11th Nov 2013
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11th Nov 2013 2:45am
Your surroundings speak to you, & you listen. This is humbling my imagination...thinking & feeling. We people are but a temporary dream, & I take comfort in that. Another gorgeous work of art. It felt like an eternity had passed as I read this. Kudos, brother!
11th Nov 2013 2:07pm
11th Nov 2013 2:59am
Your imagination on this piece is outstanding! I'm at awe my man. Well deserved to be on my reading list, well deserved indeed. Read it three times and each time it got better. Superb job!
11th Nov 2013 2:07pm
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11th Nov 2013 4:30am
Nature shapes the stocks of humans; is the relationship reciprocal. That is the question I will be pondering for the rest of the night!
11th Nov 2013 2:09pm
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11th Nov 2013 4:10pm
Awwww make me smile Kitty-such a humbling comment from such a talent-I thank You deeply!!!
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12th Nov 2013 1:21am
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 3:09am
I always leave reading your ink in awe....
You are truly amazing with a pen!
Love this Soul...Xo
You are truly amazing with a pen!
Love this Soul...Xo
12th Nov 2013 2:12pm
There She is!!! :)))
Thank You Dear Rain-Glad You like it :)
(pride...it will always be my downfalls)
Thank You Dear Rain-Glad You like it :)
(pride...it will always be my downfalls)
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12th Nov 2013 2:14pm
Thank You for Your Lovely lines Dear Petit-Indeed Truth!!! :)
Appreciate the kindness Always!!!
Appreciate the kindness Always!!!
14th Nov 2013 5:09am
i think you should work for disney...my friend your imagination is unique!!
beautiful lines...
beautiful lines...
19th Nov 2013 00:47am
20th Nov 2013 2:47am
From the mind of " Da Man"!!!
Brilliant piece Bro. SOUL!!!
That pen loves you Man!!
Sir Lancelott
Brilliant piece Bro. SOUL!!!
That pen loves you Man!!
Sir Lancelott
20th Nov 2013 4:16am
That means a lot to me Lance!!!
I thank You always My Friend!!!
You are "Da Man!!!"
I thank You always My Friend!!!
You are "Da Man!!!"
9th Jun 2014 3:13am
The title caught my eye at the first place...beaivi means "day" in my native language (Sami).
Loved this one! Somehow took me back to Sapmi (Lapland).
Loved this one! Somehow took me back to Sapmi (Lapland).
9th Jun 2014 3:56am
Thank You for the visit Kufitar!!!
I found one of the stories of Her and fell in love with it...shortly after it sparked this idea :)
I found one of the stories of Her and fell in love with it...shortly after it sparked this idea :)