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You chose
You chose her from the thousands of users online that night
Then chose to send her a message and a link from a favoured site
You chose to laugh and flirt with her til she slowly learned to trust
Then chose to find a common trait that you knew would ignite her lust
You chose her love for music to reveal your sensuality
Then chose to pursue her so you can boost your weakened sexuality
You chose to ask for her number just to hear her voice
Then chose to spin your story making the lies not your best choice
You chose to continue with them even after you first met
Now it's a choice she hasn't recovered from yet.
Then chose to send her a message and a link from a favoured site
You chose to laugh and flirt with her til she slowly learned to trust
Then chose to find a common trait that you knew would ignite her lust
You chose her love for music to reveal your sensuality
Then chose to pursue her so you can boost your weakened sexuality
You chose to ask for her number just to hear her voice
Then chose to spin your story making the lies not your best choice
You chose to continue with them even after you first met
Now it's a choice she hasn't recovered from yet.
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Re: You chose
10th Nov 2013 11:28pm
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11th Nov 2013 00:25am
I was trying to portray how angry she was at the choices made that brought her to the place she is now. Thanks for your insight Hashman.
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Re: You chose
11th Nov 2013 2:30am
Wow! You betrayed a story that had me glued in. A good way, in my opinion of meeting someone online. For online, people can become whomever they want to be, instead of the person who they truly are. To bad the one who come in with good intentions have to find out the hard way. Great piece of sliced and diced ink!
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re: Re: You chose
11th Nov 2013 6:43am
Thanks for your insight ElBaby. It is a shame that there is the dishonesty on the internet and some people learn the hard way. I think more people are clued up about things now. There are genuine ones thou.
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re: Re: You chose
11th Nov 2013 6:52am
By becoming too cautious people start to become someone they're not by concealing their true self. The dishonesty begins then spirals out of control and the choices we make hurt and can damage lives.
Thanks for reading Rose
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Thanks for reading Rose
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12th Nov 2013 7:07pm
I watched a film about this topic awhile back and it's now a tv show. Seriously an eye opener.
Appreciating the feedback Rose
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Appreciating the feedback Rose
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re: Re: You chose
12th Nov 2013 7:03pm
I'm sure you are not alone Petit_Minou. The connections online are intensified tenfold and we all know how powerful words can be. Remember the rush the connection gave and know that it can happen for real someday.
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18th Nov 2013 8:56pm
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Re: You chose
14th Dec 2013 11:22pm
yip this is the new space too many find themselves in all caught up..loved the solid strong style
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16th Dec 2013 9:24pm