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She, Me and Us
She and Me
and Miss She
miss you, She
Me and She
And I love She
But she loves Me
And Me She
Absolutely
Really crazy
And She Me
Like "Chimie" (*)
Between us
Oh, She Me are Us
One for two, thus
Two for tea, plus
OK, a crazy poem, I accept the critic, but it is funny to write it! And significant for Us!
* Chimie, the french word for chemical... better in french for rhyme!
and Miss She
miss you, She
Me and She
And I love She
But she loves Me
And Me She
Absolutely
Really crazy
And She Me
Like "Chimie" (*)
Between us
Oh, She Me are Us
One for two, thus
Two for tea, plus
OK, a crazy poem, I accept the critic, but it is funny to write it! And significant for Us!
* Chimie, the french word for chemical... better in french for rhyme!
Published 10th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 7:35pm
10th Nov 2013 00:30am
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10th Nov 2013 00:36am
No, I write in English, but obviously, I am French and some sentences are built by my French thought...
I have tried to write in French and translating in English, but the work is stronger and not very nice.
Thank you for your nice comment. I am not very proud of this text, just funny to write it.
I have tried to write in French and translating in English, but the work is stronger and not very nice.
Thank you for your nice comment. I am not very proud of this text, just funny to write it.
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
10th Nov 2013 1:47am
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