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!!Commie!! \ Amerikan Traitor***
***WARNing:a thro'away....this poom stinks-like-shit \just done for dirty fun/
more more
m ore mo
re
more
more (gimme)m o r e
more
(if
not a constant flow of more moremore,
theeeeeeconomy
f ails )
endless eternal for more,for they who already have
mo'fckn
more & more& m o r e /thinking
t h I n k I n g
poverty is it's own fault
more for more for an addicted faux-compassioned,selfAbrorb'ed species-
equitable distribution of resources[?]
without profit-motive[?] & it's inherent,
unavoidable corruption[?]
all on earth will eat!
dkzk2013poomsprofound+profounderPxtrfotoArt/dkzk
more more
m ore mo
re
more
more (gimme)m o r e
more
(if
not a constant flow of more moremore,
theeeeeeconomy
f ails )
endless eternal for more,for they who already have
mo'fckn
more & more& m o r e /thinking
t h I n k I n g
poverty is it's own fault
more for more for an addicted faux-compassioned,selfAbrorb'ed species-
equitable distribution of resources[?]
without profit-motive[?] & it's inherent,
unavoidable corruption[?]
all on earth will eat!
dkzk2013poomsprofound+profounderPxtrfotoArt/dkzk
Published 30th Oct 2013
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30th Oct 2013 1:34am
don't get the 'thro away' warning,
it's a great poem...
"poverty is its own fault..."
that's what they think, isn't it?
although "think" may be the wrong
word...
it's a great poem...
"poverty is its own fault..."
that's what they think, isn't it?
although "think" may be the wrong
word...
30th Oct 2013 2:11am
I kinda don't like 'preachy' poetry & when I find myself doing it,
it seems opining blather, but I go ahead & put it out there anyway, as if I had no control---
there's way too many beliefs & fckn opinions among Us All...I try to at least be 1/2assedly diligent in purging 'mine' as they arise. It's all dead-weight to any kind of "consciousness"----In MY O'pinion!!!
thank you for justifying the existence of said poom.......you is a 'good man', young feller
30th Oct 2013 6:30am
gee,pal...i'm sorry....you posted that you couldn't post anything. Like, why not? maybe I miss yr 'meaning'.
maybe I make a mis'take ...idunno
but thank you for dropping in ///
AND,besides:"it" was prefaced wit a 'disclaimer'....