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On your knees
I like you on your knees
capturing the scent of wanton needs
Right betwixt pleasure and pain
is where the release is sustained
Fire and ice slowly entwines
swallowing nature's tempted wine
With the poet's heart exposed
place your hands beneath my soul
Burning deep within your dreams
ecstasy taunts the weakened seams
I gaze upon your sculpted treasure
tis only for my naughty pleasure
Alas, allow the obscene communion
and savor in the extreme illusion
capturing the scent of wanton needs
Right betwixt pleasure and pain
is where the release is sustained
Fire and ice slowly entwines
swallowing nature's tempted wine
With the poet's heart exposed
place your hands beneath my soul
Burning deep within your dreams
ecstasy taunts the weakened seams
I gaze upon your sculpted treasure
tis only for my naughty pleasure
Alas, allow the obscene communion
and savor in the extreme illusion
Published 28th Oct 2013
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29th Oct 2013 2:35am
dark angel with a whip. the illusion fills me with wonder, but also sorrow, that it's an illusion...
29th Oct 2013 3:53pm
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5th Nov 2013 6:04pm
17th Nov 2013 10:54pm
Quite aggressive, bit somehow, also very erotic. Quite an entertaining read, well done.
17th Nov 2013 10:58pm
18th Nov 2013 6:03am
19th Nov 2013 7:23am
16th Dec 2013 10:16pm
Alas, allow the obscene???? communion
and savor in the extreme illusion
why obscene ???
that's the only desired scene
to go in between
the treasured island
okay valley
with his stiff long handle
resting on a ballish trolley
and savor in the extreme illusion
why obscene ???
that's the only desired scene
to go in between
the treasured island
okay valley
with his stiff long handle
resting on a ballish trolley
17th Dec 2013 6:51am
My obscene is lustfully relishing, it's glorified and divine. Thank you, again
17th Dec 2013 8:11pm
U have a sexy mind
fully divine
when he is in the ravine
let him feel fine
have a rollickingly good
sucking and fucking time
that's what all poetry here is for
you know
fully divine
when he is in the ravine
let him feel fine
have a rollickingly good
sucking and fucking time
that's what all poetry here is for
you know
17th Jan 2014 3:47pm
This sits comfortably on my side of the fence Miss Blue. Very much so. Pleasure in every line. Thanks for that.
17th Jan 2014 4:45pm
17th Jan 2014 5:09pm
You paint erotic scenes
fantasies inked pleasuring
Love the image, love your work.
fantasies inked pleasuring
Love the image, love your work.
17th Jan 2014 9:43pm
26th Mar 2014 3:57pm
I gaze upon your sculpted treasure
tis only for my naughty pleasure
Alas, allow the obscene communion
and savor in the extreme illusion
it appears I had read you before
but wasn't too sure
you haven't read any of mine
that's 4 sure
tis only for my naughty pleasure
Alas, allow the obscene communion
and savor in the extreme illusion
it appears I had read you before
but wasn't too sure
you haven't read any of mine
that's 4 sure
26th Mar 2014 5:07pm
yes, I have read you.. you have a very unique style. Thank you, deeply for your commentary :)