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Water Meadows, Winchester...
walking beside
the river
watching
a little
blue butterfly
twirl like
a fragment
of
sky
that has
broken
away...
Published 26th Oct 2013
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26th Oct 2013 2:12am
What a delicate depiction... of hope.
(I sense this must be a special place for you)
(I sense this must be a special place for you)
26th Oct 2013 2:20am
You are, as usual, perceptive,
my friend...Winchester has
happy memories for me and
is somewhere I run to when
I need a happy place.....:)
my friend...Winchester has
happy memories for me and
is somewhere I run to when
I need a happy place.....:)
26th Oct 2013 7:33pm
27th Oct 2013 00:13am
27th Oct 2013 7:38pm
The butterfly imagery -
rather a simbol of
metamorphosis and
lightness.
Awesome, the comparison
of a fragment of the sky
to a blue butterfly.
Love that extremely!
rather a simbol of
metamorphosis and
lightness.
Awesome, the comparison
of a fragment of the sky
to a blue butterfly.
Love that extremely!
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