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Thank You

Waking up with the sun in my eyes
Focused on you, my waking thoughts
You in your twilight home
Focused on Waking on Eastern bed
Words written on Blazing sunsets
Wishing me well on my special day
I wish you well to, as I thank You
For leading me back to the day
When I opened my eyes
To the beauty of the world
And You, flame of the candle
is wished upon a star
Thank You.

Written by Editor

Published 22nd Oct 2013

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Re: Thank You

HellzLips (Hellz Lips)

22nd Oct 2013 4:47am

Very sweet Grace.

I haven't said it yet, but I like the pictures you've been doing for a lot of your recent writes. It had inspired me to try it with a picture I took that inspired a recent poem of mine, but sadly I couldn't format it to fit.

The final 3 lines really sung out. Thank you

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Grace (ldryad)

22nd Oct 2013 4:57am

Hellz Lips, thank you...I tried playing with that format many times before I got it. I hope you do soon, I would love to see your poems on beautiful backgrounds. I am glad you liked what I did...sort of hallmarkish but hey, thats not a bad thing eh. Thanks for reading me...