Reminiscent

despite the shortness... it is absolutely beautiful.

i love the shortnes.. i thing it gives the poem a beautiful kiss to it and a breath to it.

keep writing. you do it so well :)

thank you darling :)

you have gotten the meaning :) thank you

heartfelt, absolutely moving...

use of vocabulary in your subject has frequently amazed me. In this case particularly, the way you have used the word, "incomplete", it's so & such absolutely perfect in the context of your poem. The missing patho is again brilliantly described in the end with your used object, the necklace of your dearest. You are in a way complaining about your incomplete poems or atleast defining like that, but such minute perfections are reminiscent of an acute perfection, execution, &...completeness. It's such a perfect & complete poem. I love it.

I love your style dear....always short and sweet and decidedly moving.

thank you both very much :))

doesn't matter dear im glad you took time and commented on this one.. it does doesn't it? wow i never thought of that until now..

all your poems about your dearest all are soo beautiful but this one stirs deeper feelings almost as if i feel how you feel brilliant work Olive :)